Matthew and Fuad's poem
A polar bear crawls across the ice,
looking for it's prey.
Breathing in the fresh, cold air
Oh, what a perfect day!
Looking around the Arctic,
the polar bear sees a whale.
It gnashes it's teeth and aims for it's rump
And bites it smack on the tail!
The whale gives a groan of pain,
and falls on it's back.
The startled polar bear rolls off
then goes in for another attack!
The whale groans yet again,
and hits the polar bear.
The polar bear rolls to the ground,
with some blood around it's hair.
The polar bear is beaten,
but suddenly smells a seal.
It looks for a big enough hole
and kicks the whale with it's heel
After a deliciuos seal dinner,
the polar bear trudges away.
For the artic will always be his home,
which means it's a home to stay
The whale roars in victory
before diving back to sea
If there's anybody who who wants to see this,
I guess that person is ME!
By: Matthew Chung @nd Fuad Hussain
Comments (15)
Emily Hasegawa said
at 4:30 pm on Dec 17, 2009
I like your ryming its better than mine!
Blake Craig said
at 4:37 pm on Dec 17, 2009
It;s got some good detai @nd humerous!
Matthew Chung said
at 4:54 pm on Dec 17, 2009
ha ha blake!
Jacques Meldrum said
at 5:06 pm on Dec 17, 2009
nice title font!
Good job boys!
Taiga Hanafusa said
at 5:20 pm on Dec 17, 2009
awesome title
good rhythming words!!! I like it better than mine!
Caroline Tessy said
at 5:42 pm on Dec 17, 2009
Maybe you could have put more colour but well done!!
Why did you right 'a' as @??
Michael Woo said
at 6:58 pm on Dec 17, 2009
Excellet source of message!
Jules Lee said
at 7:07 pm on Dec 17, 2009
Wow, Your poem is the bes out of the whole class!Especially the verse that was read out at school!
Royce Chang said
at 7:29 pm on Dec 17, 2009
Excellent Ambitious Words & Presentation boys!
Jasmine Smith said
at 8:03 pm on Dec 17, 2009
fantastic ambitious and really good rhyming
Paola Berardi said
at 8:09 pm on Dec 17, 2009
its very humorus
Bora Yagiz said
at 3:45 pm on Dec 29, 2009
this great!!! @nd funny ;-)
Matthew Chung said
at 8:21 pm on Jan 28, 2010
thanks for the comments guys!
Caroline Tessy said
at 7:41 pm on Feb 16, 2010
Its great though maybe a bit of colour
Caroline Tessy said
at 7:41 pm on Feb 16, 2010
-_-
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