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Fuad and Matthew

Page history last edited by Matthew Chung 10 years, 2 months ago

Matthew and Fuad's poem

A polar bear crawls across the ice,

looking for it's prey.                                                                 

Breathing in the fresh, cold air                                   

Oh, what a perfect day! 

 

Looking around the Arctic,

the polar bear sees a whale.

It gnashes it's teeth and aims for it's rump

And bites it smack on the tail!

 

The whale gives a groan of pain,

and falls on it's back.

The startled polar bear rolls off

then goes in for another attack!

 

The whale groans yet again,

and hits the polar bear.

The polar bear rolls to the ground,

with some blood around it's hair.

 

The polar bear is beaten,

but suddenly smells a seal.

It looks for a big enough hole 

and kicks the whale with it's heel

 After a deliciuos seal dinner,

the polar bear trudges away.

For the artic will always be his home,

which means it's a home to stay

The whale roars in victory

before diving back to sea 

If there's anybody who who wants to see this,

I guess that person is ME!

 

By: Matthew Chung @nd Fuad Hussain

 

Comments (15)

Emily Hasegawa said

at 4:30 pm on Dec 17, 2009

I like your ryming its better than mine!

Blake Craig said

at 4:37 pm on Dec 17, 2009

It;s got some good detai @nd humerous!

Matthew Chung said

at 4:54 pm on Dec 17, 2009

ha ha blake!

Jacques Meldrum said

at 5:06 pm on Dec 17, 2009

nice title font!
Good job boys!

Taiga Hanafusa said

at 5:20 pm on Dec 17, 2009

awesome title

good rhythming words!!! I like it better than mine!

Caroline Tessy said

at 5:42 pm on Dec 17, 2009

Maybe you could have put more colour but well done!!
Why did you right 'a' as @??

Michael Woo said

at 6:58 pm on Dec 17, 2009

Excellet source of message!

Jules Lee said

at 7:07 pm on Dec 17, 2009

Wow, Your poem is the bes out of the whole class!Especially the verse that was read out at school!

Royce Chang said

at 7:29 pm on Dec 17, 2009

Excellent Ambitious Words & Presentation boys!

Jasmine Smith said

at 8:03 pm on Dec 17, 2009

fantastic ambitious and really good rhyming

Paola Berardi said

at 8:09 pm on Dec 17, 2009

its very humorus

Bora Yagiz said

at 3:45 pm on Dec 29, 2009

this great!!! @nd funny ;-)

Matthew Chung said

at 8:21 pm on Jan 28, 2010

thanks for the comments guys!

Caroline Tessy said

at 7:41 pm on Feb 16, 2010

Its great though maybe a bit of colour

Caroline Tessy said

at 7:41 pm on Feb 16, 2010

-_-

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