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Blake's summer holiday recount

Page history last edited by Blake Craig 10 years, 4 months ago

My Summer Holiday

This year we had to stay in Korea for four weeks. It was really boring although we went to the cinemas to watch night of the museum 2 and transformers 2. After four weeks we went to KL and Phuket.

In Malaysia we went to a bird park, it was really fun. We went to a bird show and fed some birds. There was an Australian bird that would repeat any thing you said. We even went to a water park there weren’t many water slides but it was still exciting. I met a friend he was Chinese we went on lots of slides together. We also went on a canopy walkway we had to walk a lot to get to the start. It was hard work getting to the top because we had to walk up the side of a mountain. We also went to the cinemas to watch the new Harry Potter. It was really freaky when Dumbbell dore dies and my brother went to watch ice age three but me and my sister and mum did not. We went to a art place and did a batik. A batik is where you put wax on some cotton and then put ink over it and the ink does not go where you put the wax. I did a bird of prey.

We arrived in Phuket in the morning. Our grandparents and our aunties were not there yet .Our Aunties were coming the next day and our Grandparents were coming in two days. We opened our presents that night and I got an A380 aeroplane model. We went body surfing every day and if I were lucky I could go all the way to shore. We went to a mall to get a long sleeve rashy and a swimming hat for me and cormac. We also had ice cream. I got a berry flavour. Me and my sister and Aunt Morven and my dad went white water rafting and elephant trekking. I was driving the elephant for a bit. We also went to a water fall and there was a big jump and I tried it and it was really cool. That was my favourite day.

We had three hour our lay over in KL and we spent most of our time in a game shop we I spent a lot of my time on a wii.The game was bowling and it was pretty easy. When we got back to Korea We were not looking forward to school.

By Blake A. Craig


Comments (4)

Mr Corben said

at 1:50 pm on Sep 1, 2009

A fair start Blake, however this is supposed to be 500 words. Look at some of the others.

Mr Corben said

at 1:52 pm on Sep 1, 2009

I think you need to expand on your ideas.

Blake Craig said

at 6:34 pm on Sep 1, 2009

Mr Corben I did another one

Mr Corben said

at 8:05 pm on Sep 3, 2009

Where is it?

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